Showing posts with label YA novel. Show all posts
Showing posts with label YA novel. Show all posts

Monday, April 4, 2022

Micro Mention "Howl's Moving Castle"

Diana Wynne Jones


So, the book "Howl's Moving Castle" by Diana Wynne Jones changed how I viewed the animated film by Studio Ghibli. I am ardently aware of the seams of that movie now, where Jones's writing ends and Miyazaki's begins.

I talk about this in my full review of this novel, but Miyazaki's version of "Howl's Moving Castle" was focused nearly exclusively on an anti-war narrative, whereas the book is more just a fantasy story. As to which version I personally prefer, I'm going to cop out and say that it's more interesting to read and watch both because how these two writers mixed their aesthetics is what I find most interesting.



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Friday, September 24, 2021

"Howl’s Moving Castle" by Diana Wynne Jones--Fiction Review

In today’s review, we’re getting a castle—that moves! Ok, that was terrible. In any case, Obscurists, we’re talking about “Howl’s Moving Castle” by Diana Wynne Jones.


Diana Wynne Jones


***The Non-Spoiler part of this review*** 


What I love about this book:

I can’t remember if I first really got into science fiction or fantasy as a kid, but I suppose it doesn’t matter—both were formative to me. I bring this up because “Howl’s Moving Castle” struck me several times as being an excellent first fantasy book for a young reader. The stakes are real—from beginning to end—but it feels more whimsical than threatening. The challenges the characters face in this book never seem unsurmountable as long as they all work together.

Our main character, Sophie, is a wonderful protagonist because of her relatability, she’s a good person, but she has her flaws. Her biggest of which is that she’s nosey. If ever she’s told not to go somewhere or ask a certain question, she can’t help herself and does it anyway. This extends to really all of Jones’s characters. They’re all likable but have distinct character flaws—Howl’s vanity, Calcifer’s grumpiness, and Michael’s insecurity. What I like about these characters is that despite their flaws, they all still have the opportunity to grow and transcend their character flaws without radically altering their identities. It’s very tactful character work because, in my experience, many characters feel like different people at the ends of novels than who they were in the beginning.

It’s a slow-burn romance between Sophie and Wizard Howl, and the outcome is never certain throughout the book. We know what Sophie thinks about everything, but it’s difficult to pin down Howl because he hates giving a straight answer to anything.


What I don’t love about this book:

The middle of this novel meanders to the point of sedateness. Part of this is because of the particular curse Sophie is under—she’s a young woman cursed into being an elderly lady, but there doesn’t feel like a lot of direction from the other characters, either. 

Since most of our time is spent hanging out in the moving castle with Sophie, cleaning, making the other character’s lives more interesting, there isn’t much world-building involving the different locations the moving castle is attached to. There is, in theory, people certainly talk about the other places. But it’s precious few times that Sophie actually gets out of the castle in a way that involves us seeing what’s going on in the wider world. This might just be my perception because when I think about this book, it’s about the long, intricate passages of Sophie cleaning the castle, like Cinderella if she were a crone. 

So it’d be weird if I didn’t bring up that there is a Miyazaki film based on this novel that I’d wager people are more familiar with than the book. I was certainly in that camp. In the movie, the Witch of the Waste is a far more complex character that transcends the descriptor of a mere antagonist. In the book, however, if she had a mustache, she’d be twirling it constantly. There’s no rhyme or reason why she’s a jerk that I can see. She just is a jerk.



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***The Spoiler part of this review***
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The quick and dirty synopsis:

Sophie Hatter, daughter to a deceased Hatter and eldest sister of three girls, lives in a magical kingdom but doesn’t suppose her life will ever amount to much. This is just a known and accepted fact about the eldest sisters in this world. Sophie tries to content herself running her father’s old hat shop alongside her stepmother—who, as a nice change of pace, isn’t evil or even malicious.

Friday, September 3, 2021

"P.R." by Danielle Dassler--Fiction Review

Today obscurists, we’re punks, not goths—that’s important. In any case, the book today is “P.R.” by Danielle Dassler, and right up front, I was delighted that this coming-of-age story blasted my expectations.


Danielle Dassler


***The Non-Spoiler part of this review*** 


What I love about this book:

“P.R.” broke my heart more than once—I know—a strange thing to say in the section about what I loved about this book. But here is why I list this as a good thing—because I’m profoundly odd, I love a good tragedy, and without getting to the spoiler-ly part of this review yet, there is a lot of stuff in this coming-of-age novel, which is tragic.

I love how Dassler leans into all the manic ups and downs of teenage life, especially where it concerns young people who exist out on the fringe. “P.R.” is really a story colored by strong emotions that are often contradictory—like joy, rage, insecurity, confidence, love, and hate. It’s all the good and bad fused together. 

In situation, if not in character, our main character, Andrea, felt at times like a modern-day punk rock “Anne of Green Gables,” if Anne were a touch more cynical and frankly a bit more interesting. Andrea’s living situation is equally odd, though, first living with her sort-of boyfriend, then with her rich friend Roxanne after he has to leave town. When Andrea is coerced into running track, and she soon discovers a passion for it, it was really satisfying to watch how she grew as a person. As the story progresses, she becomes more assertive in what she wants and isn’t just shunted along by what her social circle demands. 

The final thing that I loved about this book is that Dassler doesn’t let up on the reality of the world in which her characters live. It can be wonderful and exciting, but life is no fairy tale, and for a lot of young people who come from broken homes, consequences are real, harsh, and often permanent.


What I don’t love about this book:

The mentor characters, the track coach, and Ms. Beasley compete with each other for time in the spotlight with Andrea, so they’re just concerned adult characters—but not developed into full three-dimensional people. This runs on to some of the other minor characters, too, where they feel samey and stock. The boys in the band could all be one person in my mind. 

Dassler infuses so much excellent character voice and individuality into her protagonist and the major supporting characters that the contrast with the minor cast is stark. To play devil’s advocate against my own point, though, this could be a stylistic thing because teenagers are naturally self-absorbed, so the further away from themselves and their favorites, people do become pretty samey. It’s a lack of attention rather than reality.

Also, nobody’s mom is doing a particularly good job in this story—the parent characters themselves are all pretty poor, from dads who range from neglectful to outright hostile. Still, the moms don’t ever seem to do anything right. Even Crunchy Matt’s mom, who appears to be the most successful of the bunch when we meet her, feels overbearing.



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***The Spoiler part of this review***
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The quick and dirty synopsis:

We begin with Andrea in trouble for cutting class and smoking, sitting outside the guidance counselor’s office waiting to hear the damage. During the session, talk of expulsion is brought up, but the counselor recommends against it—noting that Andrea’s heavy boots made it quite a feat for her to outrun campus security. So Andrea’s “punishment” is more creative, she’s to join the track team, which has minimum grade requirements to be on, so Andrea has to bring up her grades too.

Wednesday, August 25, 2021

Micro Mention "Alcatraz Versus The Evil Librarians"

 
Brandon Sanderson


What is with the evil librarians? First with “Welcome to Night Vale,” and I also recently read Brandon Sanderson’s “Alcatraz versus the Evil Librarians,” is this a popular trope that I’ve just failed to notice all these years?

If you're familiar with Sanderson's epic fantasy, then you should know—this ain't that. It's not a bad book by any means. It's just very different from what I normally associate with this author. Clearly aimed at a younger audience, this book also made me feel like Sanderson's goal was to write a book as "Un-Brandon Sanderson" as he could. It does, however, imply a gigantic fantasy world where we will still spend the majority of the narrative almost entirely in one location in that gigantic sandbox. I mean, it is still a Brandon Sanderson book.



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Monday, August 23, 2021

Micro Mention "Starman Jones"

Robert A Heinlein


“I sorta broke his neck,” is my favorite line in “Starman Jones,” which I then immediately thought, wait a minute, wasn’t this one of Robert Heinlein’s fictions for juveniles? Well, I guess that is tame for the guy who wrote “Starship Troopers.”

I'm kind of ashamed to say that "Starman Jones" is actually the only Heinlein novel I've ever read of his. I can't tell you how many interviews of sci-fi authors I've watched or read where they say at some point that Heinlein was a huge inspiration for them. I haven't even read "Starship Troopers," I've just seen the movie, and I have a sneaking suspicion that it's a tad different from the novel.

As for this novel, it's fine, not the most memorable book I've ever read. "Starman Jones" is enjoyable science fiction reading if you're in the mood for something a bit light. I'm not talking about tone in this regard—just that as a story, it isn't particularly challenging. It's almost like it was written for kids. No, I don't know what juvenile means. No, I won't learn. And, No, you can't make me. 



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Wednesday, May 19, 2021

Micro Mention "Crooked Kingdom"

Leigh Bardugo


"Crooked Kingdom" by Leigh Bardugo is a fantastic sequel to "Six of Crows" everything I loved about the first, and more. It's also single-handedly made reconsider the duology as being just as valid as the more traditional trilogy.

Without having to establish the core six protagonists again, Bardugo is freed up in this book to hit the ground running through the streets of her fictional city of Ketterdam, which is probably my favorite location in her stories. "Crooked Kingdom" isn't just another heist story but an all-out shadow war between thieves, merchants, assassins, nations, and most of all—Grisha.

I wrote a full review of this novel: HERE


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Friday, April 3, 2020

"The Hunger Games," by Suzanne Collins--Fiction Review

I hope everyone is doing well this Friday, staying safe and social distancing and all that. Today we’re talking about “The Hunger Games” by Suzanne Collins, a dystopian YA science fiction. I brought this novel up in my earlier review for “Red Rising,” and that series revived my interest in these books.

Suzanne Collins



***The Non-Spoiler part of this review***


What I love about this book:

I love the main character of this novel, Katniss Everdeen. She’s pragmatic, tough, and devoted to her friends and loved ones—but she also feels like a real person because she has her flaws and blind spots. Katniss, while ultimately a caring person—lacks a lot of social grace and can be blunt to the point of unflattering, a real handicap since to survive, she has to learn to charm people to assist her in the hunger games.

Like all dystopian fiction, “The Hunger Games” is an extreme commentary on society and how it ossifies into something nasty when all the wealth collects in one segment of the population and social mobility is all but eliminated. 


What I don’t love about this book:

I know I already said that I love Katniss—but this is a novel written in the first person, so it’s hard for my dislikes to not also be about her. Katniss, for all of her interesting virtues and flaws, also has this annoying tendency to be so painfully slow on the uptake when it comes to people and their true feelings for her—especially when it’s amorous feelings. She honestly never puts it together that Peeta, her one constant ally through the hunger games, is in love with her until the end of the novel. I don’t find this flaw exciting or charming. It’s just eye rollingly annoying.

The villains of “The Hunger Games” aren’t developed as much as the characters designed to be sympathetic, and that’s disappointing. They’re all of what I call the mustache twirler class of villains. Why are they so evil? Because they just are for the sake of the plot. There might be more characterization and explanations of the motives of the antagonists in the later novels. But still, in this first novel, the capital citizens are all out of touch looneys—save a few rare exceptions—and the other tributes are all gleeful murderers—again sparing a few exceptions.


***The Spoiler part of this review***
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The quick and dirty synopsis:

Katniss Everdeen, at the beginning of the novel, is doing what she does best, hunting, a skill that serves her well in the future. She has to hunt because her family is impoverished. After all, her father is dead, and in this future nation of Panem, there is no such thing as a social safety net other than the tesserae—additional food rationing—but it increases one’s chance of being selected for the hunger games.

The hunger games is a tournament to the death. Two tributes—one boy and one girl—from each of the twelve districts are selected to fight for the amusement of the capital. This is done yearly, reminding the districts of the capital’s domination. It’s also a punishment for a rebellion they had launched against the capital in the past. At this year’s reaping—the selection process for the hunger games—Katniss’s younger sister Primrose is selected for the games, but before she can be collected, Katniss volunteers to go in her place.

Katniss and Peeta—the boy selected from their district—are whisked off to the capital to begin their training before the games. It’s a time filled with pageantry and celebration. All of the tributes from the twelve districts are expected to go along with the pomp, with enthusiasm. The sinister thing is all though it’s for a game, only one of them can win, and the rest die, the point of playing along for the tributes is to gain sponsors. Sponsors, wealthy citizens of the capital, can directly impact the course of the hunger games by paying for advantages for their preferred tribute. These advantages can be anything, food, medicine, et cetera, and it’s just one more reminder that the hunger games isn’t about fairness. It’s a show—and it’s about power.

Once in the games, Katniss and Peeta are quickly separated, and the early part of the games is marked by Katniss’s efforts to go it alone. She nearly dies of dehydration and is often left vulnerable because she has no one but herself to look out for her. The career kids—tributes from the richer lower numbered districts—who always volunteer for the games for the money and glory of winning, hit on the strategy of allying with each other, at least until the loners are all dead. Katniss is dismayed to find that Peeta seems to have allied with the bloodthirsty careerists and seems to be helping them hunt her down.

The career tributes, and Peeta, manage to corner Katniss in a tree where they can’t get to her because they’re all too heavy and unskilled at climbing to risk going up after her. They decide to wait her out, but with the help of an unexpected ally—a younger girl from district eleven named Rue—who was hiding in a nearby tree, Katniss finds a nest of deadly killer wasps. Katniss drops the nest on the band of career tributes, but in the process is stung herself. When she gets to the ground, she flees but goes back to collect a bow from one of the dead tributes. The venom in her veins makes Katniss hallucinate, and she is nearly killed by the leader of the career tributes but is saved when Peeta intervenes and is grievously wounded in the leg for his trouble.

Katniss flees and spends at least one night in a pit in the throes of a hallucinatory nightmare, but eventually recovers and goes hunting in with her new bow and arrows. When she kills and cooks some meat, Rue appears again, and the two form an alliance. The two of them travel together for a while. Then eventually, they develop a plan to deprive the careers of their supplies. It’s a simple plan where Rue will distract the careers by setting a fire far away from the career tributes’ camp, and Katniss destroys the supplies.

Unfortunately, while their plan is successful, Rue is ultimately killed by the tribute from district one, who is then killed by Katniss when she shoots him in the neck. Katniss gives Rue a proper memorial and alone again, she heads off despondently by herself.

Then there is an announcement, for all the tributes to hear, a rule change stating that two tributes can win the hunger games provided they are from the same district. Katniss immediately sets off to find Peeta, who has been lying low because of his injuries. Katniss attempts to nurse Peeta back to health but ultimately finds that—against his wishes—she has to go out again and risk herself to recover medicine for him.

After obtaining the medicine to heal Peeta, and more tributes are killed, they find that they have to leave their hideout to confront the final tributes, and win the hunger games. Before they ever manage to face the last tribute, the capital unleashes a pack of mutant dogs on the three remaining tributes, mutants created from the corpses of all the other tributes who had died. In the end, Katniss kills the last tribute more out of mercy than anything because the mutant dogs savagely mauled him.

When it appears that Katniss and Peeta have won the hunger games, the capital makes another announcement, taking back their rule change, informing them that there can only be one winner of the hunger games. Katniss and Peeta choose to commit suicide instead—robbing the capital of the one thing the games were always about, the power over the lives and deaths of the district citizens. However, before the two of them can go through with it, the trumpets blare, and there is a third announcement stating that they’d won.

After returning to the capital, and recovering, Katniss finds out to her horror that the show isn’t over, and might never be, she is expected to play a new role, that of the grateful victor. The leaders of the capital are not pleased with her that she managed to outsmart their game. It’s then that she finally realizes that Peeta hasn’t been pretending to be in love with her for the audience’s sake, he is in love with her and believes she’s in love with him. It’s a colossal disappointment for him when he finds out that Katniss isn’t so sure.             


Analysis:

Writing in the first person is always a gamble. If your audience doesn’t like your main character, who you are presumably writing from the perspective of, then the rest of your work on the story doesn’t matter. People relate to people—not plots—and if your audience can’t get behind the character telling the story, then the story is dead in the water. So when an author, such as Suzanne Collins, pulls it off with stories like “The Hunger Games,” it’s incredibly impressive.

The first person perspective of experiencing “The Hunger Games” from Katniss’s point of view makes the horror of the games, and the capital, all the more intimate. All of the action sequences in the novel are immediate and brutal because the first-person perspective plays well with an active voice where the third person can often stumble, and where it’s easier to write in the past tense.

Collins, for the most part, deftly sidesteps a lot of the awkwardness that comes with first-person writing, which is a genuine talent I envy. When writing in the first person, since the character you’re writing from is the defacto storyteller, there are several traps the author can fall into and bring the narrative to a screeching halt. For instance, there is the over describing of actions problem. For example—I walk to the door, then I turn the doorknob slowly before opening it to the abandoned corridor and make my way down the hall. Vs.—Detective Miller opened the door slowly and then made his way down the abandoned corridor. First-person has a way of pulling us personally into the story, but doing it effectively, usually requires more words.


Parting thoughts:

So I’ve only read this first novel of “The Hunger Games” series, and my introduction to it was the movies. I remember loving the first movie—thought the second movie was okay and just never got around to watching movies three and four, which tell the story of the third novel. Which means my picture of the series is a bit incomplete. I think why I stalled on this series is because the second movie was my least favorite kind of movie, one that is just okay. Great things and good things are easy to explain why they’re worth watching/reading/listening to, and it may seem to be counter-intuitive, but I also enjoy things that are objectively bad—or terrible.

Terrible things had people who believed in those projects enough to get them out there for the world to consume—and some of the time, it isn’t that the idea behind them was terrible but just that the execution was all wrong. This creates the greatest opportunity to learn from their mistakes, which is why I like them. Consuming great works of art is enjoyable—necessary even—to know where the bar has been raised in the past. However, they don’t teach you a whole lot other than how to emulate them, which means that subsequent works following in the tradition of something, lose that elusive luster of originality. To demonstrate what I mean: no one can write “The Lord of the Rings” again. Even George R.R. Martin’s “A Song of Ice and Fire,” popularly known as “Game of Thrones,” lives in that shadow and is shaped by it, which of course, all literature is like this—shaped by earlier works. It’s rare, like one in a generation rare, to find a truly pathfinding piece of literature that has the potential to create a new genre or even subgenre.

Now I’m not saying every piece of bad writing is a failed original idea. More likely, the case is it’s a recycling of other ideas that are executed poorly. These are still valuable to read as well because if you’re aware of what something is trying to be like, then that contrast can allow you to compare the two things and better understand why the original worked so well and something failed to live up to that standard. The art of invention is a lot like this; hence the cliché failure is the mother of innovation. Knowing what doesn’t work can help guide you to something that will work.